Well, I gave it a listen, and although it didn't finish downloading, I've listened to about 2:15 so far...it is really good...the vocals sound a bit strained, like you(or whoever sang) was talking more than singing...
Just my 2c...
Tyron "mity88" Deakin, I agree with you. The vocals arent that great. The song is surprisingly difficult to sing and Im not much of a singer as you can hear.