obviously this thread is asking for opinions, so i'll be frank with mine :-[
i really don't understand or like the whole racing stripe vibe on a guitar, mostly due to the lack of class. guitars are meant to be classy, and possibly flashy, but not racing striped. leave it for the fast cars 8)
i'm also not very much a fan of your previous finish scheme. looks like something pg happened there ? ?
i think the monterey strat looks good, something like that but maybe a bit more understated would be cool.
i like the idea of a metallic gold, possibly if you could get close to the colour of vic's new LP, i it would look mad.
otherwise what i'm planning for when i build my tele sometime soon is to go for a darkish red stained wood body with a black pickguard.
this also looks pretty cool: