New Demo

studmissile

I'd appreciate a new set of ears?

guidothepimmp

Very nice Vaughan. I thinks its a great arrangement. The only thing that sticks out for me that would add something would be vocal harmonies perhaps?

studmissile

guidothepimmp When you're right you're right. Thanks.

Yeti Very interesting. Definitely some food for thought. Thank you.

Yeti

That's got a seriously cool vibe. I think it could do with a little variation though. It may be worth looking at changing up the orchestration a little more. At the moment it gradually builds over the course of the track, which is really effective in the beginning but the last few changes are a touch subtle for me. Possibly drop back to something very simple for a verse 2/3 of the way through then crash back in with full sound.

I watched a 12 Tone video this morning that might be interesting. It's 'actually' on 4 chord loops so it's not a perfect match but I think that a lot of it applies.