Visashi
Hi,
This will be my second mix. Please give crit.
Lyrics, piano,acoustic, bgv - My wife
The rest - Me
Used EZDrummer 2 for drums.
Mixerboy
Vocals are a bit too soft throughout plus maybe decrease the reverb a bit (put a 20ms or so delay on it as well if you haven't already, it sounds a bit buried in the verb).
The drums are noticeably compressed.
Sounds a bit narrow as well, try pan the guitars and keys out wide, LCR style (everything panned either hard left, centre or hard right)
Slap a high shelf over the whole mix and crank it a bit, overall it sounds a bit dull/muffled (just watch the sibilance and cymbals don't get harsh).