WesleyWard wrote:
Yeah V8 im not really a singer myself, though I think my singing is improving...
For what it's worth you are -ahem- light-years ahead of me ?
Perhaps you've seen (or done) the free Coursera Berklee online courses? I rather enjoyed the Pat Pattison songwriting one earlier this year, part of it was checking out this set of vids on vocal/lyric phrasing - he made some subtle changes, which (imo) had a big impact.