Manfred-Klose
at Stone Jets Headquarters we have been very busy writing songs and alot of it, we decided to put a demo together to get some feedback from the public, have a listen here and let me know what you think:
some cajon drum and shakers also feature....
Lethe
Very cool. I quite like this song.
I like the singers voice!
AlanRatcliffe
Great! You're on to something good there. Love the changes.
Something is slightly out of tune, its chorusing with the guitars when it comes in at about 0:23.
Lead vocal is maybe a little overcompressed for my taste, making the delivery a little flat. I'd also want to add in a little "glue" in places to pad out the sound - key pads or a bit more reverb here and there. Those are personal choices though.
Manfred-Klose
Thanks for the comments
Yeah its one of the backing guitars that is playing the single notes will lots of reverb that is causing the phasing (or perceived as it)
The synths is a good idea, originally it was sounding like a club track, but wanted to keep it as acoustic as possible, lol was suppose to be just guitars and vocals then boom all the other stuff was added.
i will go and experiment with those ideas, thanks
karoo
Jis this oke's got a nice voice hey.
Song's got a nice feel to it.
