Tamla Kahn 'Hammeron' McMahon wrote:
Ok - next
Haha, you didn't like the previous reply? I often wonder what the GFSA members' personalities
are like and whether their comments reflect what they would be like in person.
I liked the song. My opinions based on my own experience with our songs:...
It's a brilliant song to play live when you already have the crowd's attention solidly.
Without the crowd already into what you are doing, it's the kind of song that won't work
as well. But with crowd support, goose bump city when done right.
The composition itself... personally I don't like vocal melodies that end with the same
modification on every line and think working in some variations could even allow more of
a climax in the right parts of the song. But that's just me. Every style has its own qualities.