One of my tracks (WaterMonkey)

stu

The last song I upload was a bit of a fail.

Anyway I would like you guys to tell me what you think of this. Please be as honest as you like. If you think its a piece of sh*t and I should shoot myself before I come up with anymore crap like that please go right ahead and say it. I wont mind ?

http://www.box.net/shared/hk00iqv6jf

stu

I did say you guys could be honest with me but I get the picture. Ill be off to find my gun.

BMU

Woah don't go all russian roulette on us just yet.

I quite enjoyed the lo-fi punk vibe of this song. You have clipping in places and things sound mushy, BUT that can all work. The missing element is the vocals sound far too polite. To make it fit the spirit of the song you need to spit them out with vitriol, not sing/speak them politely. Be John Lydon and this will work beautifully.